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Supernatural - Winchester Haiku

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[Jun. 5th, 2007|07:00 pm]
Supernatural - Winchester Haiku
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[cameragrl]
Title: Lips
Author: cameragrl
Rating: PG
Genre: Gen
Characters: Dean
Spoilers: none
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: This is for fun not profit.  I am don't claim Dean or Sam or....(sniff) John, as being my property or anything else to do with the greatest show on earth.

LIPS

He said 'wasted' cruelty made sensual
He smirked, laughter and sex
Pen in mouth, casual unaware
Mesmerized by the nuances of his lips
Waiting for the next show
He doesn't disappoint
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[User Picture]From: naughtyscrabble
2007-06-06 04:34 pm (UTC)
Man, Poodle, you have nailed the essence of Dean’s lips! Fascinating choice of words and phrases. Sensual, laughter and sex...absolutely. And he seems completely oblivious to the effect his lips have on females. You are SO right...Dean never disappoints!

My favorite line is ‘Mesmerized by the nuances of his lips’. To me, it captured everything perfectly. So elegantly stated.

EXCELLENT!!!
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From: cameragrl
2007-06-06 10:13 pm (UTC)
Thank-you Ferret!!!!

I was so worried that I didn't write a proper Haiku. I'm going back to read the other haiku poems. FANTASTIC idea for a community.
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[User Picture]From: naughtyscrabble
2007-06-06 04:50 pm (UTC)
You have just inspired my next haiku! The subject? Why Dean's lips, of course! LOL

ferret
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